Great tale, Scott. I have to catch up on the previous chapters! Do you use e.g. https://hemingwayapp.com to check for e.g. adverbs or passive voice and such? Not that it's needed, I mostly ignore the score it gives but for adverbs outside of dialogue, I find it useful.
An artists work is never done! Keep posting, you have vivid characters and a rich setting.
Great tale, Scott. I have to catch up on the previous chapters! Do you use e.g. https://hemingwayapp.com to check for e.g. adverbs or passive voice and such? Not that it's needed, I mostly ignore the score it gives but for adverbs outside of dialogue, I find it useful.